Sunday 8 September 2013



       The Bumble Bee who Couldn’tFfly. By  Rutendo

New York city not a land far, far away, but still one of the most magical cities in the world. Streets Buzzing with bees and colonies that seem to go on for ever. It’s the type of place where fairy tales seem to be possible, no matter who you are.

This isn’t one of your typical Cinderella story, no pumpkins, no mice, and no cinderella or at least not the one you’re used to. Meet Periwinkle.

She was young when she lost her mum & her wings, leaving her with  Justin Bee-ber her stepfather,and then there are these two Periwinkles stepsisters Fee-Bee and Honey-pie. Who are... how do I say this a bit buzzy in the head.

If I’m gonna let a fairy tale play out here I should probably tell you.Periwinkle has a talent even though she can't fly, collect pollen,and almost everything normal bees can do, she still has a talent which is unusual for a bee.

She didn’t know it then but she was going to change the future as we know it. When she was left at home alone she’d go up into the attic and start inventing.

One day as she was walking through the streets she and Beeritny Spears ran into each other. They had some coffee and talked. Beeritny Spears and Periwinkle felt they connected so much that  Beeritny invited her to a private party at the Richard club.

As they said their goodbyes Periwinkle walked home. On the way  there guess who she ran into..... Her father. He saw the invitation poking out of her bag, grabbed it in a hurry and flew off into the distance.

Periwinkle was so upset she could fly after him... but she had been inventing for years and there was only one way she would get into the party, Using her mechanic wings.

She put the jetwings on flew 30 cm fell and died.THE END. Huh I guess you can't live a fairy tale after all.

“Wait wait this is all wrong,” says the director “lets go from when she gets the wings on. And this time don't die follow the script”

She grabbed her wings flew 30cm when her jetwings abruptly stopped working, luckily the jetpack ran on grass;which she was coincidentally surrounded by.

She arrived at the Richard,outwitted security and just as she was about to approach Beeritny Spears  Honey-pie and Fee-bee approached her and dumped her in a ditch.

This is where I come in. I’m no fairy godmother but I could be the one to open the door of opportunity for her, and by that I mean literally open the door for her to get into the club. Just when all seemed hopeless Optomise Prime and I flew in and took Periwinkle to the club.

There Periwinkle not only found out that her wings were invisible and the most powerful throughout the universe she also found out her mother was still alive. Justin Bee-ber and his children went bankrupt. Periwinkle and her mother Tinkerbell fell happily ever after. The end
“CUT that’s it for the day lets wrap it up” says the director  

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